Character Development / Short Story / Sullatober Dalton

Journeys end

I’ve written the flight from the Northern Cape area to Cape Town. It was easy ass I’ve flow with an organisation nicknamed Fright Services but the other idea of computer versus mind travel has run out of steam. I tried different points of view and an extra character, and even a different start, which can make me sit up and take notice. The story of Brexit doesn’t become dramatic at the referendum, it starts when parliament turns down the deal and you ask, What now? Anyway, I couldn’t get it to conclude properly, even well enough to convince myself it it was literary. It has so much going for it I’ll put it on the back burner and dabble with it now and then. I’ve done that with quite a few ideas and it’s amazing what they can become. travelling further with the story